Irtiza Quader
123 ABC Street
#111-222 Singapore 123456
(+65) 9123-4567
irtizaquader@gmail.com
17 February 2013
Ms Christine Tan
Human Resource Manager
JAYA HOLDINGS LTD
13 Tuas Crescent Singapore 638707
Dear Ms Tan
Application for Marine/Mechanical Engineer Internship
I am writing this letter to express my interest in joining Jaya Holdings Ltd as an intern in Marine Offshore Engineering department.
I am currently an undergraduate student with the National University of Singapore (NUS). I am on my second year and I am studying Mechanical Engineering. I have been exposed to an extensive range of modules in my course which has equipped me with the knowledge in various aspects of engineering. Furthermore, modules which require me to do laboratory analysis has enabled me to improve my laboratory analysis techniques and also provided me with hands on experience of various engineering concepts and machines.
My education has provided me with a comprehensive background in working in a stressful environment and has built my public relation skills. During my National Service I was posted to the Police Coast Guards(PCG) as a Sergeant where I was put in charge of corporals and constables to man a boat and protect the shores ofSingapore
123 ABC Street
#111-222 Singapore 123456
(+65) 9123-4567
irtizaquader@gmail.com
17 February 2013
Ms Christine Tan
Human Resource Manager
JAYA HOLDINGS LTD
13 Tuas Crescent Singapore 638707
Dear Ms Tan
Application for Marine/Mechanical Engineer Internship
I am writing this letter to express my interest in joining Jaya Holdings Ltd as an intern in Marine Offshore Engineering department.
I am currently an undergraduate student with the National University of Singapore (NUS). I am on my second year and I am studying Mechanical Engineering. I have been exposed to an extensive range of modules in my course which has equipped me with the knowledge in various aspects of engineering. Furthermore, modules which require me to do laboratory analysis has enabled me to improve my laboratory analysis techniques and also provided me with hands on experience of various engineering concepts and machines.
My education has provided me with a comprehensive background in working in a stressful environment and has built my public relation skills. During my National Service I was posted to the Police Coast Guards(PCG) as a Sergeant where I was put in charge of corporals and constables to man a boat and protect the shores of
Having developed a keen interest in marine engineering, it is
my aspiration to gain a foothold in this industry. Hence, I believe that Jaya
Holdings Ltd will be able to give me a comprehensive understanding about this
industry and also provide me with creative
thinking, experience and good judgment. With my knowledge
of basic marine engineering and marine law, I hope to be given this opportunity
to obtain an internship with Jaya Holdings Ltd
My resume is enclosed for your evaluation. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your positive reply.
Yours Sincerely
Irtiza Quader
hey
ReplyDeleteletter sounds good. can't really think of anything to nit pick on.
really like to tone and language used (:
weiting
Thanks weiting really appreciate it:)
DeleteHi Tiza!
ReplyDeleteI think your cover letter was pretty well written. It was clear, succinct, and straight to the point.
I did feel that the first two paragraphs could have been merged though. Also, the sentences “I am currently an undergraduate student with the National University of Singapore (NUS). I am on my second year and I am studying Mechanical Engineering.” could have been improved to just “I am a second-year Mechanical Engineering student at the National University of Singapore (NUS).” Sounds a little more concise I would think.
Nonetheless, I liked how you ended the letter off with “I look forward to receiving your POSITIVE reply”, it makes you sound confident of your application!
All the best with your internship!
Wenlin (:
Hey thanks for the constructive criticism. really appreciate the help.
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